These are my final products.
I double checked everything with my subject teachers, and she said that everything was fine apart from a few things which I have tweaked.
Date: I had originally left the date off of my magazine front cover, but I had mentioned it on the contents page. This was unintentional but I have now added it in the lower right corner next to the barcode.
Spelling: I had mispelt a couple of words such as 'constrato' instead of 'constralto', which I have now rectified.
The Editors Letter: My subject teacher gave me advice on the positioning of my editors letter. I have now rearranged it, and I think it looks a whole lot better.
Hi Mel,
ReplyDeleteJust to let you know that I have assessed your work and feel that it fits very well into the Level 4 range. This is especially true for the R&P as well as the Evaluation for which you have scored full marks. Just a couple of points, could you have a look at the opening to the blog? It suddenly starts with no context just the questionnaire. Also,there are still unfortunate references to CONSTRATO which need to be changed! You have done an enormous amount of work and should be very proud of the outcome.
Well done
Mrs A
Thank you very much miss, I will change all this as soon as my laptop is repaired as unfortunately at the moment it is refusing to turn on, but it's getting repaired tomorrow, also, I have completed my evaluation and it is on a disk as I can't upload it to YouTube so will get this to you at the beginning of next week :)
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